DarthPejka's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[slackers episode0:the bum]

okay...

since this is your first, I'm gonna be constructive...
first of all... AUDIO COMPRESSION!! file size was too large for this to stay on the portal, so it'll quite possibly get blammed...
second, graphics were relatively good, but you need some animation, at least make the bum have a walking animation... and even though the guy didn't have any lips, you could synchronize it with what he says.
third, the least important, the intro sequence was too long... make the "underground films presents" sequence shorter...
overall not too shabby, and get a real voice actor, maybe record your own voice and distort it a bit.
that would be all.
Darth Pejka

exocel responds:

cheers, i was gonna voice it myself but i thought the microsoft mike just sounded creepier, and he was meant to be limping but for some reason the dragging sound he made isnt playing.
as for the lip syncing ,yep it sucks, i dont think more needs to be said about that, the biggest thing that pissed me off was the bllody button i couldnt get to work at the end!!!.
h well, its only my first try and i made it in 7 hours in one sitting so wether it does good or not ,i aint bothered people are watching it so what more do i need than that?,
cheers for the advice,
exocel.

[Flicker Book]

okay...

the music was good, but what was 5 megs in this one? maybe you didn't compress the music at all? next time, be as kind to do so.
otherwise it wasn't really interesting at all, I gave it a 2...

Mobbsy responds:

...Thanks...