Animation was awesome, no doubt about that. And, well, pretty much everything else too. So why am I giving it only 8 out of 10? Well I have a reeeally simple problem: I can't understand what's being said. Not all the time, mind you, but sometimes all I hear is indecipherable yelling. This was not an issue in MGA, though it may simply be because English ain't my native language. Thus, my question/request/suggestion whatever is equally simple: subtitles please? Probably with an on/off switch so people wouldn't find it a distraction?
Yeah, that will be all for now. Oh, and keep up the GREAT work :)
I just had to write a review cos' I just watched the film 300, so yay, it was funny, but just because I saw it today.
ps.: consoles suck, PCs own...
Well guess what, I just had the same thing not so long ago. Though I didn't get a shotgun blast in my face... She left me for some fuckass retard who hardly managed to pass primary, could never appear on dates, all he knew about a matrix was that it was a good film, etc.
So yeah, it's fuckin' true. Too sad. Ah well, you made your point.
Keep it up,
now that was cool...
seriously, I haven't seen such perfect syncing to music in a flash before... it was simply amazing. I can't give positive criticism since there's nothing to criticize...
oh, and to the guy a bit below me:
from Wikipedia, entry on Aphex Twin:
"After quitting his course, James remained in London and released a number of albums and EPs on Warp Records and other labels under many aliases, ***including AFX***, Polygon Window, Blue Calx, The Dice Man, Power-Pill."
Well... fuck you mister, you forgot to say one shouldn't watch this before going to sleep. Now I'm gonna have a good nightmare o_O
Anyways... amazing job. Random and surreal, just the thing I like. With loads of violence. And some humor. Those noises really did their job.
So keep it up,
I just saw this flash about 2 days ago, or I dunno, on your site. yay.
how long I've been waiting for the series to start, I don't know, but I'm glad the first part is finally out.
the animation itself was nice, the merging of 3D graphics and Flash, though it was strange at parts, but otherwise cool.
looking forward to the next parts,
don't talk about this lacking quality. seriously, I was afraid to watch it as I thought "omg, another serious crap flash", but it turned out to be a cool fbf. well... it was kinda weird, it seemed to me as if it was first rendered as an animation, and then imported back to flash... why'd you do that? normal animation was too slow or what?
anyways, good work, and if there actually WAS a concept behind this, well then I'm looking forward to the full series :)
keep it up,
to be honest, after reading a few reviews, I kinda thought this was gonna be sucky, but after watching it I realized it was a good choice.
animation was smooth, though not always, sound was awesome, you did a really good job on that. graphics were cool as well, but as some people mentioned already, it was kinda weird to see people being shot, and just moving forward with the same blunt expression.
as for history... well, I live in Hungary. you came too late. actually, you didn't come here at all. fucking commies came first and they fucked up half the country. can't say so easily though if it was for the better or worse being in the "eastern block".
anyways, keep up the good work,
not bad at all
wow... if everyone's first flash was like this, newgrounds would be a much happier place. I'm sure this will pass (or maybe it already passed as I'm writing this). one comment though... try to loop audio better next time.
everything else was good; compared to a first flash, it was great!
keep it up,
since this is your first, I'm gonna be constructive...
first of all... AUDIO COMPRESSION!! file size was too large for this to stay on the portal, so it'll quite possibly get blammed...
second, graphics were relatively good, but you need some animation, at least make the bum have a walking animation... and even though the guy didn't have any lips, you could synchronize it with what he says.
third, the least important, the intro sequence was too long... make the "underground films presents" sequence shorter...
overall not too shabby, and get a real voice actor, maybe record your own voice and distort it a bit.
that would be all.
cheers, i was gonna voice it myself but i thought the microsoft mike just sounded creepier, and he was meant to be limping but for some reason the dragging sound he made isnt playing.
as for the lip syncing ,yep it sucks, i dont think more needs to be said about that, the biggest thing that pissed me off was the bllody button i couldnt get to work at the end!!!.
h well, its only my first try and i made it in 7 hours in one sitting so wether it does good or not ,i aint bothered people are watching it so what more do i need than that?,
cheers for the advice,
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